tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6089855586826805573.post210347656419599442..comments2023-03-25T01:47:40.767-07:00Comments on Winterly RLC: 2.28 Prioritize Marcyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02258736557326154333noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6089855586826805573.post-60440680845415507952017-12-01T05:31:24.333-08:002017-12-01T05:31:24.333-08:00Good, they both need some sense shaken into them! ...Good, they both need some sense shaken into them! But Sun and her childish trait and Paolo and his complacency... <br /><br />I do have hope that things will get better from here, especially since another adult will be around! <br /><br />Paolo really is clueless; he seems to have detached himself from the rest of the world and doesn't have much sense of what's normal in interpersonal relationships. But Tula was definitely exaggerating how angry she was. She just sees it as the only way to get through to Paolo.Marcyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02258736557326154333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6089855586826805573.post-49352569582980513572017-11-28T13:27:43.446-08:002017-11-28T13:27:43.446-08:00Get Tula away from that baby!!! Honestly, this cha...Get Tula away from that baby!!! Honestly, this chapter had me mad at Paulo and Sun. They need to care for Haliya themselves! Paulo says that he wants to do better, but right now he's neglecting Haliya the same as he neglected the other kids. But I hope that now that he and Sun made up, things will change.<br /><br />Paulo is just so clueless. I don't know how else he expected Tula to react. But I do think Tula was playing up the anger as part of her "I'm a normal teen" act.GodReadingCraftshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04582691115972458553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6089855586826805573.post-50653742349136909702017-11-25T11:31:27.711-08:002017-11-25T11:31:27.711-08:00Thank you! XD this story has a lot of curveballs, ...Thank you! XD this story has a lot of curveballs, that's for sure. <br /><br />We finally get to see what's behind the mask...Marcyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02258736557326154333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6089855586826805573.post-51565510746111533322017-11-25T11:12:07.002-08:002017-11-25T11:12:07.002-08:00I liked how you used the synchronized tasks in the...I liked how you used the synchronized tasks in the story, and I feel badly for Sun not being able to be a proper scientist as she was, but it's nice they're going to be a proper family. I was NOT expecting that!<br />Finally Tula is honest for a few moments. Acting is no fun, especially with family. I can empathize with that.Frogsnackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09055887588288370476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6089855586826805573.post-55007012731334982792017-11-25T03:37:41.334-08:002017-11-25T03:37:41.334-08:00Yaaay! I've been rooting for them too XD
Than...Yaaay! I've been rooting for them too XD<br /><br />Thank you! It's an interesting challenge to write such a calculating character. That last bit about her feeling tired is how I feel writing her sometimes XDMarcyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02258736557326154333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6089855586826805573.post-89426661339879344592017-11-25T02:24:10.584-08:002017-11-25T02:24:10.584-08:00Yay, Paolo is finally ready to move on... sort of....Yay, Paolo is finally ready to move on... sort of. I'm happy for Sun and him!<br /><br />That last part about Tula was amazing again. She's such an interesting character and you write her so well!Annie Simshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14807656616844793537noreply@blogger.com